This week we presented our work from over the past three weeks. The presentation gave me the opportunity to explain my work and also get feed back on how it can be improved. From this, I have been able to start thinking about how I can develop my concept and project with the help of my pairs
Model – Front View 
Model – Side View
From the presentation, I have been able to identify where my project can be improved. In order to create more of a gentle a soft flowing effect with the suspended element of the wire, I should consider enlarging the model and giving it more height to allow the suspended wire to move more freely. This would create a better representation of the threshold between dream and reality.
In order to achieve this, I might start considering Es Devlin’s work to influence my own. Devlin’s designs are often large in scale and dramatic. Some of her designs are quite simple (like my own) but are made very effective with the use of scale to make them more dramatic. I feel as though that this might be a good direction to take my model in.
I also identified the lack of suspension in the photo. I was so focused on creating softness, distortion and shadow with the light in the photograph, that I forgot to include the essence of the suspension of the wire. Being able to identify these points really helpsme in developing my project into something better.
Spatial Design by Ciara 